In this episode, explore why generative AI excels at creating first drafts.
You’ll discover the key difference between first and final drafts in the writing process. You’ll understand why AI’s creative, probabilistic nature makes it ideal for getting initial ideas down. You’ll learn how to leverage AI for the messy “ugly first draft,” saving you time and effort. You’ll find out how to best integrate AI into your writing workflow for maximum efficiency. Watch now to master AI-assisted writing!
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In today’s episode, let’s talk about writing, first drafts, and final drafts. Why is AI better at the first draft than the final draft? It’s not because AI can’t write. We know it can. Properly prompted, it does an amazing job. If it’s not, then it’s time to improve the prompts.
The reason we prefer AI to write the first draft rather than the final draft is because we have a lot of expectations for the final output, especially in business, in nonfiction business writing. We have criteria—perhaps criteria we can’t even verbalize well, other than, “I don’t like that,” “That doesn’t sound like me,” or “Something seems off.” That’s a little weird that we expect to be in our final product.
What are those things? Whether we can articulate them or not, those are deterministic outputs. As a brief recap, deterministic means there’s no guesswork, no randomness. Two plus two always equals four. No randomness. Probabilistic means there is guesswork, randomness, and creativity. When AI is creating content, it’s going to be probabilistic because that’s the way generative AI works. It’s all probability-based.
The first draft, as my friend Anne Handley calls it, the “ugly first draft,” is almost entirely probabilistic. When you and I write, we try to get our words out, just words all over the page, forgetting about editing, style, form, and requirements. We just want to get something on the page. We just need to create. It doesn’t have to be good; it just has to exist. And then we edit, and we edit, and we edit, and we edit, and we turn it into something.
In other words, the ugly first draft is a probabilistic task. We have a general idea of what we want to write. But given the same prompt, we might produce different results on different days. You’re given a prompt and you’re trying to write it on a day you accidentally put decaf in your coffee maker rather than regular. Is your writing going to change? Mine sure is.
The first draft is allowed to be messy. It’s allowed to be ugly. It’s allowed to be incoherent. It’s allowed to be chaotic. It’s probabilistic, which means that generative AI, being an inherently probabilistic system, is going to do great with it. It can have as few rules as we do.
The final draft—that’s much more deterministic. You have tone requirements, style requirements, style guidelines, a brand voice, brand guidelines, and a number of rules. You get the idea. When you look at how education, if you look at the grading rubrics and the requirements for something like the five-paragraph essay, it’s so rigid that it’s one of the reasons why AI writes better than most students—because students are locked into these iron bar cells of how to write. It’s so deterministic. The more deterministic a task is, the more work it is to coerce generative AI into staying within ever-narrower guardrails. Your conclusion must always start with the words “In conclusion”; you must have these transitions between paragraphs. I have a whole other rant about education, but that’s for another time.
If you go back to Hemingway’s “write drunk, edit sober,” you could update that to the much lower-calorie version of “AI writes, human edits,” and have it be just as accurate. Will AI become a better deterministic writer? Yes, absolutely. The reasoning models that exist today already do a great job with that. Upcoming models like the new Deepseek R2, which supposedly is off the charts for today’s benchmarks, will get even better at following very strict rules.
But if you want to leverage the power of AI where it’s natively best today, put it in environments where there are as few rules and restrictions as possible. Let it do the first draft, or maybe even the brainstorming with you before the first draft, so that by the time it filters down later on, you can be the one creating it within the very specific rules.
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